by mindventure
did you make me wait so long? Five stars for this one but please don't take so long to publish Chapter Five.
The sex scenes with Brian and Conner is fantastic but the sex between Carla and Angie is mind blowing! I'm definitely anxious to see how the next encounter plays out. I would love to see this series made into a movie!!!
5 more stars for your girls. You have an inventive mind!
The saga continues. I appreciate the chapters coming one after the other so quickly.
The dialogue is arousing, sensual, sexy and completely believable.
Again, well done.
keep this story going. It just might be the best I've read on this site.
and very well articulated. I just stumbled on to your writing, I needed to let you know that I appreciated it and will seek out the rest of it.
I really liked the earlier chapters but taking a story that was fine between two people and turning it into an orgy was a meh, event for me. I get a lot of people will like it. It just isn’t my deal. Didn’t vote because I don’t want to ding your rating on as well thought out story.
That was very considerate of you.
Gary13