All Comments on 'On Her Knees'

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and your hot, sharp style.

immature and puerile, on both their parts.

ok great idea and loved the part where shes caught. but one thing i find that snaps a reader of enjoying a story as hot as this could have been is: to stroke the part of his cock that wasn't in his mouth. i read it a few times ti make sure i knew what was going on. i wasn't sure if it was the waiter who joined and it was a gay story or what.

again very good story with room for improvement

wish to see more

3/5

I noticed the same thing... More than once you used he/his instead of her...