All Comments on 'One Little World Ch. 05'

I am seriously so impressed. This is such a great story. You are amazing and it shows through your writings. Thank you and will be looking forward to more on this. There is so much going on in this story....has my mind working over time trying to touch down on a few different things here. Loving the characters too.

Thank you. You're the reason I keep finding myself checking up on the new stories every few days.

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It is remarkable that this is your first submission.

Loving it, made me cry. Keep on writing