All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 06'

For a first submission to Literotica, this was quite outstanding. I enjoyed it tremendously and look forward avidly to your New Year story.

Have a great Christmas and thanks for a very erotic read.

I've enjoyed the story so far, but where is your last post you mentioned?

This story gets hotter and hotter. i hope she is happy that she visited her ex.

Happened on this storyline in the middle. I like the author's ability to work through dialog. The theme seems quite interesting as well. I will definitely need to start from the beginning!

I think you are a very good writer. The story travels along at a nice pace, and has the right interaction of characters to make your work read as if it was really happening. GREAT JOB & THANK YOU.

Still hot and well written. But be careful. You are starting to really reach to out-do the previous instalment. Plausibility is beginning to be strained with all the business with Mike. If you don't know the expression "jumped the shark," look it up. The story hasn't jumped yet but steady on the tiller.

Keep writing!