All Comments on 'One Week Ch. 01 Second Edition'

An excellent first story. Very well written. Looking foward to reading more about Louise.

I have never had a TV or TS fantasy, much less an inclination . . . until now. Unfortunately, I am too damn old to follow up on the inclination part. What a hot story! I think I know where this story is going but no idea how it will get there. I can hardly wait to find out. Oh to be young again . . . .

Great story!!

A well crafted story of transition and rapture.

loved the story and wish i could live it. what a nice thing to have done for someone save their job and give them the life we all want.

just love it, realy like this story :) wish it was me. well portrayed characters.

i hope i find a lady that would do that to me make me into sissy girl and work as a girl in thier office

Louise, this is fantastic,, got to hurry to CH 2

Wonderfully written!!!

Erotic and titillating and a true page-burner!

I only wish I were in a situation and 'forced' to be like Louise!!!

Lovely story. A turn on even to a strait guy. Waiting for Chapter two. Will Louis get his/her wish with her own boobs?

Will Louis be seduced by the dom/boss, Jackie or is Jackie realy Jack?

You've probably heard this before, but a good fantasy story will leave the reader breathless. So let me catch my breath a bit...steady now...slowly let the air in, then out...what can I say--this was one fine excursion into a daydream I wouldn't mind becoming reality! Many thanks.

Wish I could find work like that!

I am a new author on this site and I aim to emulate Louise in her writing.

I love the style and the content.

I hope I can achieve something of your success.

Best of Luck, Caroline xx

Wonderfully written. Loved every word. Give us more please!

Chapter One is beautifully written...extremely arousing and detailed (and for me, detail is ALWAYS a good thing), with interesting characters and scenarios---and I'm looking forward to the rest of it. For sure, Louise69, you should consider writing more material.

I work for a lady on her farm and one day after dinner she ask me too do the dishes I said yes I would love too is there any thing else you want me too well if you like mop the floor I will be back in two hour I said yes miss I have it all done well it toke me a hour and I had it done when she came home she walk in and I for got I had a apron on well I see you have it all done I said yes miss I was about to take the apron off when she stop me no keep it on you look cute in my apron I think you should wear one for to-day so I was in apron all after noon the next day when I came to work she told me to come in I have to be away this morning so you can clean this place for me I left your apron on the chairs see you later well I went and got the apron but I see a bra on the chair too I thought well I am a lone I could wear it and take it off before she home well it did pit it on it fit just right like it was made for me then I started to clean about a hour I look up and there she was I ask her why she back they call me and said could I come back in the after noon I told them yes but you why you in my new bra I told her it was there I thought you want me to wear it well let me see you in it take the apron off I did as told well the bra do fit you it a little big in the cups wait here when she came back she had two socks roll up and put then in my bra there now you have breasts like a girl look she I look in the mirror and yes I did look like a girl do me new girl like her looks I don't know why I said yes then she ask would you like to wear a blouse I have a nice petty pink one that would look nice on you I said yes miss I would love to wear your blouse I did try it on when you were a way you did why you take it off then I thought you would be mad no dear here a short dress too you can wear now I was dress as a girl now when I come to work I go and get in to my girl clothes one day she told me she hire a man to work out side I ask her what I would be doing she told me you stray in the house and clean now lets have some tea we did and she give me two pills take them it will help you I said yes miss well after three month I came to her miss when I got up this morning my bra was small it didn't fit so I came with no bra on and the new man told me you need a bra on girly well the miss went and got me a new bra she had there girl is that better I said yes miss but why my breast are big do you know the pills I gave you each day and told you they would help I said yes well that why you have breasts like a girl and how do you like them I said they are very lovey and I smile at the man too when he told me I need a bra miss can I keep them yes you can and maybe some sexy bras and panties yes you may but only if you do as told I will please I will please then show miss how here that when she open her pants and saw a big cock well girl I knew what to do I bend down and she shove the cock in my mouth I suck her cock she told me are you my girl bitch and belong to me I said yes miss I your bitch and please to be please miss I hope you would shove your big cock in my pussy ass and that what happen after three years I become a sex slave to her and the male that work here

Was not bad until they (quote pulp fiction) brought out the gimp!!!

It has 2 extra parts to finish the story and fleshes out whole thing by 90, 000 words. Good stuff

every body seems so satisfied; i like that and i wish i'd been in this story.

love you all

She smelled victory, not smelt. A smelt is a small oily fish.

Per the Oxford English Dictionary

smelt (verb) a simple past tense and past participle of smell

I loved most everything about this story. Well thought out and exciting. I personally don't care for the rubber part or the bondage items, but the rest was excellent. Very exciting to live life as she was meant to be,

well after three week been a older lady house maid and been dress as a girl to-day when i came to clean her place she told me that she just brought a new outfit for me to wear i then ask you mean i do not to have to wear apron any more no dear i think it time you wear a nice outfit but first you go shower and use the soap on the tub and then come to me in a towel and shave too even your legs please well i went and did as told i thought this is the day she going to make me her maid well after awhile i was in her bed room on the bed was a sexy bra and panties and yes a red and white maid dress with black nylons well she had me sit down and did my face up then she got two fake breasts she to me this well up keep my bra in place when i put on the dress as she glue them on then the bra was put on i stand up so she could hook it up then her hand went to my ass and slap it she did it again now my girly tell ma you like your bra yes ma i do love my new bra and my breasts too ma that my girl then ma slap my ass some more now who the boss around here you are ma that right girly now bend over a bit so ma can put some thing in your ass hole i did as told some thing nice and warm was shove up in my ass hole it felt nice then ma put on my panties and nylons then came the dress after i was dress ma told me now go do your chore i work all day once i felt a buss sound and my hand went to my breasts to rub my nipples just the ma walk in on me well i see my girly like to rub her tits just then she open up the front of my dress now show ma how you play with them as i did ma walk behind me and lift my dress now girly ma going to pull out plug in put in there i told ma is that why i feel this way yes dear i want to see what you would do with one in your ass would you like to feel how a girl feel with a cock in her yes ma i would i never had a cock up there yet well after that night i found out that ma was a she male she had me over her bed and shove her big man cock up my ass hole as she pound my ass i told her ma please ma come inside my ass ma told me to beg i did just that and more ma i do any thing you want but please make me your girly bitch boy then you will be my house bitch yes ma just then she came when she pull out and shove it in my mouth i suck her cock clean and now i live as her house girly bitch

Absolutely addictive and compelling writing! I was drawn in and couldn't stop reading! The way you portrayed the main character was full of depth and the erotic was well woven. Thank you!

Louise you are an artist using words instead of oils. Each character you've created played superbly under the direction of your pen. I'm looking forward to reading the next and following scenes. Hoping they as good as this.

XO TBC

I meant to give this five stars but I accidentally hit four.

Please forgive me.

You are a gifted writer and really brought Louise to life... Outstanding

I taken away by this lovely tale of change in this former young man's life, as travels in womanhood. How & why it came about was nothing less than a gift bestowed upon him.

As he became Louise a new life took over beginning with sensual feeling of her skin being kissed ever so gently fire feminine undergarments and the lucky Lee hug given to her by her corset I just gave her shape and security, as I'm writing this comment I feel like I'm beginning to turn it to her (wanting to become her) as I look in the mirror.

I long to step into a beautiful and sexy pair of panties, and bring them up my smooth and silky legs and finally wrapping them around my waist. As I turn around and look at myself in the mirror admiring my beautifull pantied behind, I begin to feel every bit the lady I wish and long to become. I continue my journey into femininity I'm picking up a garter belt and wrapping. It around my waist (fastening it up behind my back) and picking up a pair of shear thigh high nude stockings I walk over to the edge of my bed and gingerly have a seat. Racing my left leg with my toes pointed out I place the rolled stocking over my toes and begin the enrolling and smoothing of my nylon up my leg. Feeling the sheer material as I smooth it up my leg towards my upper thigh just takes me to another world, (one that is denied to men) a world that only a woman's legs have the pleasure of feeling. Once I have my stocking on my thigh in fashion it to its garter straps and then repeat the same feminine procedure up my right leg until good rest upon my upper thigh as I also fasten it to its garter straps. (What a beautiful female ritual it is when wrapping one's legs in nylons.)

After I wrapp a lacy strapless bra around at my plump female breast and hooking from behind, I feel how lovingly my breast are firmly cupped.

After stepping into a sexy pair black high heel pumps I stand and walk over to the Mirror and admire myself as I'm becoming and feeling more like a lady, and as I walk over to my closet I realize that I also and walking like a beautiful female. Well I'm wondering what to wear I see what am I very sexiest black pencil skirts so I decide to wear it along with a purple strapless bustier top which enhances my hourglass figure. Even though the bustier top is really snug it's very much worth it because it bushes rest enhancing the womanly cleavage it makes me feel even more sexier. Now I hold my pencil skirt by the sides is it first step on leg through it followed by my other leg and gently bring that sexy skirt up to my waist it was a bit up and button it up.

Finally walking over to my vanity, I sit & begin the final steps in beautifying myself by applying my makeup. Starting off with some foundation, I lightly that little Foundation through out my face, then using a sponge I lightly dabb it in.

Once done I begin with my eyebrows, like coloring my eyebrows a brownish brunette, so I choose the proper color to blend in. Once done I start with my eyeliner, then move on to my eyelashes with a dark mascara to compliment both eyebrows & liner.

I then go back adding a little concealer. And again going back to my eyes for the final time, applying a beautiful burgandy Smokey eye. And for my lip color choosing a matching lipstick by maybeline.

Finally as I put on my last piece and everything is done and accomplished I twirl around and sashay towards the full length mirror and as I look at my entire figure all I could do is try and remember to breathe since my breath was taken, leaving me Breathless ! Before me Stan's a feminine version of beauty that wasn't there when I had woken up this morning, everything looking so beautifully real it's just amazing at the transformation that was created within less than an hour after getting out of the shower.

Feeling and looking so beautiful and femininely sexy enjoying the sensuous feeling of my lingerie I said hugs and kisses my skin making me feel so sensuous so beautiful like a true female must always feel when she's walking out in public and Men stop dead in their tracks just wondering how she would feeling like in their arms how her stocking legs must feel as they're wrapped around their waist while they lay on top of her making passionate love to her body hearing her moans of pleasure and squeals of delight as a stroke thickly in and out of her.

Yes when I enjoy a story that is very well written and so beautifully sensual or even tawdry, this is how I rate them by letting my imagination take me away and becoming the lady that I should've been born as💋

Realistically a little bit about myself I'm 52 years old and I just moved back into my own apartment, right now it's 3:48 in the morning at 9 a.m. I'm walking over to bloomington's and another department store too buy myself at least three baby dolls, along with three sets of panties with matching bras. Some mylon stockings & a garter belt or two and a pair 5 to 6 inch come fuck me heels. And on my next payday a couple of pencil skirts & tops, also a dress or two. Each week I'll add a couple of more items (a little bit of this and little bit of that) and yes one thing I am going to buy tomorrow is a nice juicy dildo so I can lick & suck on while I play house.

Thank you for such a great story . I went through something similar . Even my child did not recognise me . I am and have never been happier and its so good ..

Most Excellent!

To do excellent writing on this subject requires a genuine feeling for both genders. It is and you do.

Congratulations.

I can think of only one word to describe this story and that word is AWESOME!!! I give the story 10 stars.

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W - O - W !

wow...wow but what happens to Louise ? she cannot lose Jade surely ???

This author has such an amazing imagination.

I do not recall finding any part of this story boring. It held my attention all the way through.

Then to drop that cliffhanger bomb in the last chapter was almost maddening.

Parts of this story will bounce around in my head for some time to come !

Nice work Losise.

Amazingly well done. I was there with Louise, in her world, watching through her eyes. Masterful!

Very well written! Has to be my very favorite!!!