by Middleagepoet
It reminded me of the joke about a guy finding a Jini on a beach. His wish was
"...to be long, firm and buried in her (a pretty girl's) pussy", and BLAM, the Jini turned him into a kotex!
At least this story has "Vibe"!
a well written sad story, one would feel sorry for the poor bastard that would have to put up with that kind of turmoil in his life. Vengeance should have been severe.Thanks for the post....Rich
And by no means am I descending to any sort of revenge (to borrow some of your flowery language) in telling how inane I found this little effort. So, following your footsteps, I was never 'appeased' here, neither 'touched' nor 'pleased', but rather as you put it, felt as if I was “drowning inside”… <P>
Ok, there was one plus – even if it was not meant to be funny –it was hilarious (try posting it in the humor section!).
I can't believe many people didn't get it. The POV of the story comes from Mr. Buzz. Her BOB (battery operated boyfriend). Her vibrator/dildo. Ok, maybe I'm stating the obvious here.
For those of you who thought she was cheating on a husband or something? Get a clue and actually read the story. I was amused.
if the point is that the third person in her bed was a vibrator, how could a vibrator have and erection as the author stated.
"if the point is that the third person in her bed was a vibrator, how could a vibrator have and erection as the author stated."
Well, I have not seen many flaccid vibrators... they all seem fairly erect to me, lol.
MAP
Excellent story. Too bad some of these morons have no reading comprehension.
Some people don't appreciate a story which is different from much of the work that gets posted.This is well written with a good twist at the end, if you are one that thought it was a zero then you are the loser not the author.
Simple, you only just have to not like the story and it gets a zero. I didnt care for the story or the way it was written, therefore, zero. As they say, one mans meat, another mans poison.
It smakcs of something a woman would write when she is old and immobilized due to disease and sickness. It smacks of a womans porn magazine writing. I dont find it erotic, stimulating, or for that matter interesting.
Half the world's population are women. He should have dumped her and gone in search of a MUCH better woman. He is pitiful, really.
Haha, comments here display the same confusion as from another story which is from the POV of the woman's cat. As for the story itself, it's fun but a little lightweight.
Oh, I can't believe I misread this story a year ago. I got it this time. Funny story.