All Comments on 'Only One For Them Ch. 07'

by PHAROAHT

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lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 12 years ago
I am hooked

Am glad to see the development in this story and can't wait for more

huntersangelhuntersangelover 12 years ago
great story pharoaht!

wow, so many creative and original elements in this story, i'm so captured by them! i know which line you were standing in when God was handing out talents! i'm so amazed with your imaginations and your gift for story telling that, i remembered your story line and characters even after your lengthy absence. i don't really do that, usually i have to go back and reread stories to get caught back up into the loop before proceeding with the latest chapter. well, please do whatever it takes to continue with this excellent story, i'm so looking forward to your next chapter!

aggie35aggie35over 12 years ago
Loved It!!

They finally got to mate with her!! Lytta has some crazy yet awesome ass powers! I Love this story, please update soon xoxo

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Wow

Is her stronger half going to cause problems for her? It seems ruthless and power hungry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
i cant remember the last time I was soo engrossed

This story had me on pins and needs. I wanted to yell scream masturbate and cuss all in the same breath. I can not wait till the next chapter. I do worry about the other side of Lytta though, is it sorta like the Phoenix that was a part of Jane Grey in Xmen, that will eventually take over as it draws power? Either way I am loving this!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OMG

that was so great greater than any i have ever read on here so when we going to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Love it absolutely amazing can't wait for more. Most addicting story I've read yet

sylentpoetsylentpoetabout 12 years ago
Holy Crap!

This is so awsome! glad to see that tey have finnaly mated and I love how Lytta has come into her powers. The girl is bad. So can't wait to see what the future holds for them. The fight with Anouk is sure to be epic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
awesome

very well written story love cant wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
AWESOME

Is there more? I loved this!!

Please continue...

Awesome cliffhanger

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!

I think you should proofread your story ,I had to fill in words or figure your intent.Story is still good though , when will you finish it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Another great story abandoned.

The last post of this story was Jan 2012 guys. I really liked this story but I highly doubt the author is going to pick it back up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good story,,shame it has no ending,,

Been over a year and no ending in sight,,so i guess this is another unfinished one,,really sucks to leave people hanging like this,,,,a waste of time reading for nothing.....Im going back to chapter one and posting,so maybe nobody else will have to read a non-ending story...

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Angry, great story no ending. She was finally coming into her own with her powers and now we will never know

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please Continue!

Awesome story, finish it or give us another Chapter! Your a very good writer, don't leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Please continue . ....Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

pretty_girl1996pretty_girl1996over 6 years ago

I love this. Please continue writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Awesome

Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
WHY!

Why did you never finish this story it could have been immense!

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story so far, would like to read how it ends.

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