by PHAROAHT
Am glad to see the development in this story and can't wait for more
wow, so many creative and original elements in this story, i'm so captured by them! i know which line you were standing in when God was handing out talents! i'm so amazed with your imaginations and your gift for story telling that, i remembered your story line and characters even after your lengthy absence. i don't really do that, usually i have to go back and reread stories to get caught back up into the loop before proceeding with the latest chapter. well, please do whatever it takes to continue with this excellent story, i'm so looking forward to your next chapter!
They finally got to mate with her!! Lytta has some crazy yet awesome ass powers! I Love this story, please update soon xoxo
Is her stronger half going to cause problems for her? It seems ruthless and power hungry.
This story had me on pins and needs. I wanted to yell scream masturbate and cuss all in the same breath. I can not wait till the next chapter. I do worry about the other side of Lytta though, is it sorta like the Phoenix that was a part of Jane Grey in Xmen, that will eventually take over as it draws power? Either way I am loving this!!!!
that was so great greater than any i have ever read on here so when we going to the next chapter
Love it absolutely amazing can't wait for more. Most addicting story I've read yet
This is so awsome! glad to see that tey have finnaly mated and I love how Lytta has come into her powers. The girl is bad. So can't wait to see what the future holds for them. The fight with Anouk is sure to be epic.
Is there more? I loved this!!
Please continue...
Awesome cliffhanger
I think you should proofread your story ,I had to fill in words or figure your intent.Story is still good though , when will you finish it?
The last post of this story was Jan 2012 guys. I really liked this story but I highly doubt the author is going to pick it back up.
Been over a year and no ending in sight,,so i guess this is another unfinished one,,really sucks to leave people hanging like this,,,,a waste of time reading for nothing.....Im going back to chapter one and posting,so maybe nobody else will have to read a non-ending story...
Angry, great story no ending. She was finally coming into her own with her powers and now we will never know
Awesome story, finish it or give us another Chapter! Your a very good writer, don't leave us hanging.
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