All Comments on 'Our Fantasy'

Loved your story - much like my own fantasies. Now if your next story has them doing it well...that would be great! Thanks.

lovely story,

Great short story. Looking forward to reading more.

Used to talk about crazy fantasies while making love, some of it got pretty nasty, too. Just harmless fun, nothing we would ever try for real.

Then one time we were on a long trip, stayed at a hotel on the way. They had a flyer advertising massage in the room, $60. So we talked, then why not?

OK looking guy showed up, wife got on the table under a sheet, he gave her a nice rubdown while she was trying to expose herself, but he kept covering her back up, it was actually funny to watch. Poor guy was getting all flustered, kept looking at me.

Finally she was lying face down, sheet pulled up off her fanny, legs spread and he gave up and stopped. That was in Colorado, I guess they have laws and things? Anyway, some things are best left to fantasy.

Ok for a fantasy, but definitely not lovely.