All Comments on 'Our Weekend Ch. 03'

This chapter concludes what really is a lovely romance story. However, it is flawed by the introductions to each chapter, which are all too brief, and to character development. A gentle slow, build-up is important in a Romance story, and this one unfortunately lacks that. The use of the second person present tense to narrate the story is also a drawback, but this third chapter does have a more fully developed plot, which sets it above the previous two chapters.