All Comments on 'Out of Gas'

As you read you ponder, you realize no sense making a comment. You stand and you shake your head. As you walk away you say, "screw it.."

Must second the comment above. This subission would benefit from a good editor.

Not to put you off with what might be your first story on Lit, but not only is this not really the usual style found in the Romance category, I have to agree with the other comments - it's nearly unreadable.

I would suggest researching the categories in more detail and finding someone to help with basic editing.

'As you are walking down the street ,no street light in the near pitch black night, your car has runs out of gas now on your way to the nearest store to get some gas and a gas can.I ..."

This looks like the type of sentence my 8th grade English teacher would put on the board, then we'd have to find all the many, many mistakes.

Stopped here. As a reader, I want to enjoy what is written, not have to mentally correct every sentence.