by darcysweet
By far the best bodypainting story I've read: and so sexy, intense, and well written. Ooh I hope you've written more; I'm going to look now.
Very fun and creative.
Love the plant references when describing the male's anatomy. cute/clever
I feel odd rating my own submission but it won't let me comment without a rating and I suppose if I don't give it a 5 why should you? I just wanted to say thanks for the comments. I love a little sugar!
LOVED this story. The characters were hot and the writing was so good! Not something you always get with erotica.
- Mistress Red Pen
Excuse my coarse language but that was just fucking awesome.
There is no suspense, from the beginning you know there is going to be sex. You know there is going to be some woman eating pussy and cocks in cunts.
But still, how you got us there, how you built the picture, how you set the stage in my mind.
Just fucking awesome!
This is just a fantastic story, wonderfully written, perfect pace and left me wanting, no begging for more.
Simply Brilliant
I feel that this story is most about Inara's involuntary exhibitionism and the fact that she rewards her lovers is immaterial, the story may even have been better without that. Literotica doesn't have a D&S category, which is a pity as it is there that this story truly belongs.
and when you play, know the stakes and especially the game. TK U MLJ LV NV
I could visualize the actions of the characters. Keep doing that!