All Comments on 'Panther's Eyes Ch. 02'

I am so glad you continued this story! Cant wait for the next!

its going way too fast in my opinnion, you aren't letting a natural line of events play out. She was way too accepting, was she a virgin?, how come none of this seemed strange, it just doesn't seem believable.

The first chapter was good and decently written with the plot more thoughtout. Also the usage of words were more refine but this chapter was terribly penned as if you were rushing things and definitely sounded very amateurish, so amateurish it was as though written by a young teen with no knowledge of what is sex. Dick??? Come on, that word is really a no-no. Try harder if you're going for a new story.

i think you should continue because it's really good..

I really liked it so far. You should write more. Oh, and you should put a little more details.

nice pumped for the next one

The title tells it all as 85-90% of the stories on this site are unfinished. You started an excellent story so WHY did you not finish it????? Retired Army NCO

Many of us have stopped writing because of anony say the things they say. The others get banned by replying back.