by Phon
Very nice development. Looking forward to chapter 7.
Hi, hope you have some more Parfum chapters on the backburner. Interesting where this has been going but it needs some sort of resolution, with Jill, and where he's going with this research and all...
This is one of the better pieces I keep hoping will be finished. Please don't let it end the way it is now! Thank you.
Your parfum series has been fun and interesting, more so than many of the stories here. I hope you could have at least one more to wrap things up, for James, Jill, his experiments and his experiences with others. But I know life gets in the way of creativity sometimes.
Glad you have picked up this story again. Hope you are able to continue it.
James and Arlene met at the mall, went bowling and then to a karaoke place. After they started making out at the karaoke place, they transported back to the mall:
They were now mutually masturbating each other completely oblivious to the fact that they were in the middle of the busiest mall in town.