All Comments on 'Party Games Ch. 01'

I'm amazed no one else has seen fit to comment on this story yet, given it's an entertaining and well-written variation on a familiar theme. Particularly enjoyed the section where Mitzi has her clothes ripped off, an enticing cocktail of semi-reluctance and sexual frisson. Wouldn't be surprised if a future story had her engineer a situation where she has to be stripsearched in front of a group of strangers, just for the buzz.

My only complaint is that this story ended too soon. Wonderful game.. anybody want to play?

A bit rushed and brief. A good idea like that deserved more build up, more teasing and more attention to detail. Not badly written though.