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An hour later, Kevyn, Patrick and Louise were walking through the airport and to the car that was waiting to take them to Patrick's home now their home as he kept reminding them. In spite of what was happening with their family, Patrick was happy and at peace. He had Kevyn and now a sister in Louise and everything else would fall into place.
- COMMENTS
SexyRose20almost 10 years agoThis is a great series this is actually the second time i have read it
SexyRose20almost 10 years agoI love reading this series this is actually the second time i have read it
vickivaleover 11 years agoYou talk about one twist and turn to another twist and turn. It seems no matter what danger is averted there is always something waiting. Great suspenseful story. I just hope none of the Sinclairs get hurt or die I would cry at this point... LOL I know I am a sap!!!
kalamazoo707about 12 years agoAuthorVanessa and Veronica who are the twin daughters of Ethan and Katrina and nieces to Patrick.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoUmmmm...... no ending so much has been left untold. I hope u will continue this story. No u need to finish this story. I hope to see a chapter sooner than later.
kalamazoo707about 12 years agoAuthorI don't put the end because I never know if its really the end. I like to have the option of continuing if I choose to.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoLove the story, but is it the end? It seems like this could be an ending, but I admit that I can't always tell with your stories. If this is the end of the story Patrick, then it is a bit unclear, just as it was with your story Ethan. Do you just not like stating "The End" to your stories? Anyway, something that makes it clear the story has actually ended would be nice. That said, I really enjoy your stories and will continue checking back on the Patrick story for awhile I guess just to make sure I don't miss anything, like an 'Epilogue' or something...
goodwillmagicabout 12 years agoLoved that Gene got what he wanted and his first thought was "Oh shit". hehe be careful what you wish for, you just might get it!
I hope that everything goes good for Louise, she certainly deserves some happiness.
How those two could be so nice coming from that family with those siblings ... wow.
fluerabout 12 years agoKevyn's family is a greedy lot. I'm glad she not letting them poison her relationshop. As for Lou, I hope she finds that special someone.
As for Clay, you play with the devil then be prepare to dance with the devil. I found it ironic that when Clay was dying he clutched a cross. Where was his religiousity when had plan to kill the so-call love of his life. When comes down to everything, he was selfish and saw Kevyn as an object. He wanted to possess her and he resented Patrick for being the man he could never be. Is'nt ironic that he and Eugene both fear and were drawn to power Patrick represented.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoThis chapter was absoultely amazing I can't wait to hear more about Kevyn, Patrick, and Louise in V&V storie. I hope Louise gets her own story. Love ya stories Kal.
