All Comments on 'Paying for Dinner'

Interesting for a first try- double pussy is a turn on, especially from a woman writer; dont rush through it though, slower with more detail and lingering is much more exciting. I'm curious as to where you go from here

well written; the internal dialog particularly.

Thanks, and looking forward to further tales.

Emily,

This is the greatest story I have ever read, and I've read it so many times. Please write more. I know you are busy, writing other less-important things. But my hand needs some new motivation from you. More stories like this. Same type of setting.

Dizzy.

Your story was hot and nasty. Just the way I like them. I hope you write many more of these.