All Comments on 'Performance'
by Oldguy45
- 5 Comments
Anonymousover 17 years agogood stuff - well written, not like some of the other drivel I've read
duddle146over 17 years agoWhat a great plot! Older recently divorced man starts looking at his young female neighbor who finally hangs out her own sign showing the time he should arrive at her place. The stuff from which erotic fantasies are made. Throughly delightful and a fun read. Enjoyable!
Recent Anonymous entry should have been duddle146
Erotonautalmost 17 years agoThe fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
Erotonautalmost 17 years agoThe fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
<i>(Reposted, as I'd planned to award 75 points, so this should average out.)</i>
naughtyandy4ualmost 3 years agoWell written, nice build up to the mutual climax. I can attest this does happen and it reminded me of my own private show.
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