All Comments on 'Personal Trainer'

by jaylicker482

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redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

did i miss the incest part?no mention of a family bond

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Where is the incest

Is john her son

MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 9 years ago
* * *

To short, Who the hell is she and

this is defiantly in the wrong category.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 9 years ago
Grocery Lists?!

Fetish, maybe. Incest? No. Taboo? No. Lame? Absolutely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nope

Just...nope; no attempt to create any kind of back-story, just pointless detail and a rush to get to the sex, and when you got there, it was just...whatever. No stars, when you show some interest in working out your stories a little better, I might be prepared to take some interest in them.

hawkeye125hawkeye125over 9 years ago
Calm your Shit!!

People, their stories are in the incent AND TABOO category. It doesn't have to be incest to fit the category.

And as someone who has actually posted stories on here in the past, I can honesty say its not even up to them which category their Stories go in.

That's decided by the people or program running the site.

So if you think their stories are in the wrong category, stop complaining to the author, and start complaining to Literotica

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

Enjoyed the story but really didn't care for the diet plan L O L

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