by m_storyman_x
Will your story titled "Photo Studio" continue? It seems like it just stops at chapter 9.
This is the second multi chapter series of yours that I have read, and with both I've noticed that as it progresses you seem to lose a lot of details. You completely seemed to forget that in chapter 2 Scott decided to start dating Amy, yet she only had a minor mention in ch3 and never again.
I just reread this story and still wonder why you just abandoned it. Your still posting so you didn't disappear. Hey I enjoy your work, like where this was going but you left it in the middle. Please take a shot at finishing it.
that this story still has plenty of 'legs'!!
When are you going to finish it?
j
This series turned from promising start into an increasingly meaningless series of characters having increasingly meaningless sex to the point where I skipped the sex in the last few chapters just to see if the plot was actually going anywhere. It wasn't.