by m_storyman_x
This series turned from promising start into an increasingly meaningless series of characters having increasingly meaningless sex to the point where I skipped the sex in the last few chapters just to see if the plot was actually going anywhere. It wasn't.
that this story still has plenty of 'legs'!!
When are you going to finish it?
j
I just reread this story and still wonder why you just abandoned it. Your still posting so you didn't disappear. Hey I enjoy your work, like where this was going but you left it in the middle. Please take a shot at finishing it.
This is the second multi chapter series of yours that I have read, and with both I've noticed that as it progresses you seem to lose a lot of details. You completely seemed to forget that in chapter 2 Scott decided to start dating Amy, yet she only had a minor mention in ch3 and never again.
Will your story titled "Photo Studio" continue? It seems like it just stops at chapter 9.