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All Comments on 'Picking up Sweet Thing Ch. 01'

by jc_loved

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
too much i'sm

ive never wrote but the piece seems to be lacking of dialog from your lover. that would spice it all up and by the way, keep on doing the stories as they will get better!

from a perv etc

xtremeddxtremeddover 13 years ago
Yes, continue

you painted the "what" picture, now consider describing "who" and then why....

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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