All Comments on 'Plan "B"'

I liked this heart warming story. You don't have to use rough language to write a good erotic story. Reading it left me with a good feeling. I believe there are still a lot of good honest people in the world like your characters in this story.

the lovely girlfriend was a bit too willing, a bit too obvious.

there was need for more discussion of the pros and cons of not taking the new york city job

now, at age 35 or so, he will always wonder, "what if"

and a bit better writing could have dealt with that possibility

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I wonder why some people even read a story. If the spelling of the town name is a big deal to them. Anyway i liked it.

I really liked this story. It was sweet and romantic and the sex was very hot. I did find the dialogue between the characters a little cheesy but otherwise a great story.