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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Several of these characters seems to have at least two names

Victoria/Sofia, Demona/Amber, Colin/Hugo

What happened?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

It's not just the name switch this time, but the abrupt ending of this segment. Proofread your stories better, or find someone else to help. And definitely check before hitting post if you copy/paste.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
could be a good story

this could be a good story if the names didnt change mid sentence every few sentences. this isvery frustrating.

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