All Comments on 'Prize Bull Ch. 05'

by carlieplum

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

*Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday dear Travis! Happy Birthday to youuuuuuuu!*

Seems like they are both getting the presents. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nicely put together

Well written story, erotic, enjoyable, and exciting. One of the better BDSM series. We look forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
cock sucking cum slut here

I have had a lot of men fuck my mouth and loved every second of it. Now I think I will find a young man and fuck him with my mouth untill he shoots his sweet cum into me. Then I will fuck his sweet ass with my dick untill I cum in him.

Nice story, I was hoping she would have a man over for the party and the man could fuck his ass.

wolf9696wolf9696over 10 years ago
5/5

am absolutely loving your tale........your combo of love and bdsm is awesome......hope you keep this series going....:)

carlieplumcarlieplumover 10 years agoAuthor
Sorry for the delay

Hello readers. I was experiencing a little writer's block but I've come unstuck and a new chapter is headed your way. I hope you'll like it!

escriterraescriterraover 10 years ago
Pleasuring the male & taking her own pleasure

Mmmmm . . . it is always lovely to find a well-told tale featuring a lady who understands the erotic pleasures awaiting both her and her guy at the entrance to his crinkled opening. Toying with him there and savoring the delicious role reversal of being the penetrator in order to give both herself and the lucky man intense sexual arousal and pleasure can make for such delectably naughty, exciting reading, as is the case here.

She will fuck him in chapters yet to come, yes? Surely she is anticipating the pleasure awaiting them both when she slides her strapon inside her prize toy's eagerly proffered and by now well-trained ass --- the sexy, saucy, inventive, and self-confident protagonist simply must be bringing herself to delicious orgasms as she imagines conducting that extremely important and intensely arousing part of the young man's training, correct?

Teasing the readers is naughty, too, but we, just like the hapless sextoy Travis, cannot help but anticipate more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a bitch.

Older woman uses and abuses young, insecure man. Without regards for his true feelings, the self centered cow uses him as her toy. I hope in chapter six he smacks her in the mouth and throws her in with the pigs. Disgusting, unoriginal story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lovely story

There is nothing wrong here with two consenting adults doing what they both enjoy. Besides, the story is very sensual and well written. Despite the BDSM theme there is an almost vulnerable, emotional tenderness to it, which I love. Personally I actually wouldn't mind buying it if I see it on amazon, because of its superb quality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
People are so critical of this story

But he is of age and clearly enjoys the experiences he is getting from her. so hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Don't Mind The Critics

This story must bring out desires that they are afraid to pursue. Why read up to chapter 5 if they are so disgusted?

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