All Comments on 'Puppet Ch. 04'

Honestly, the mind control chip/magic plugs a lot of potential plotholes because it allows full control over the slaves, but then there's the question of what's stopping an unscrupulous owner from just imprisoning someone forever and never setting them free.

The fuck? Its not even finished... shame on you

Holy cow what a twist. Incredible story.

Ew, that was so creepy. Great job, haha! :D

I love well-written stories with a fucked up twist ending, it's so dramatic and engaging.

Well made dear writer, I applaud your work!

that changed the story from a guy in love with a girl to a guy that loved his daughter and went over the edge because of it

That was so well written...

I couldn't stop reading. Brilliant job!!!! ;-)

Eventhough kinda devious, it has some hot stuff in it. Personally, I loved it. Good stuff, always.

Eventhough kinda devious, it has some hot stuff in it. Personally, I loved it. Good stuff, always.

What a great twist to the story! This was a very good read, well written, imaginative and as horny as they cum!

Evil you are evil... I was hoping for a happy ending.

Excellent story.