by Boxlicker101
The problem for me is that the Puppet Master needs too much control: it works for him, but makes for a less interesting "read" since he is not vulnerable, I.e., can't really be surprised. Within that context, a very good story.
I like the idea, the plot, the things he did to them. However, there's something missing, e.g. the girls should be at least confused in some way..
But I give you 5 stars ;-)
But there's no reason to have these women not remember ANYTHING from these encounters. Isn't it hotter for the Puppet Master for them to remember it as a dream or some kind of desire? Isn't it better if the sisters are inexplicably holding hands at the window?
I'm just curious. Why redheads?
They're not THAT exotic. I mean really. (But I've actually thought of putting red hair color on my--hair--)
If we're going to be just talking frankly--I'm having side-effects from having a few days ago a flu shot. And I just hope it goes away soon. Because I want to go out and have--a little-fun.
and I don't want you to whisper. I want you to shout and scream.
"I want to surrender."
So--
Make me dance--
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZZlcS50qzw
for my former (unpaid) lawyer: P. M. (You make legal stuff poetry.)