All Comments on 'Pure Moonlight Ch. 11'

will be if u dont update within the next 48 hrs!!!!!

This is gooooooooood but really really hate the cliffhanger!LOL!

I missed that window- but I promise I will post as soon as possible!

I loves me the conflict! Excellent work. I really like when authors aren't afraid to be hard on their characters. I hope the reconciliation is gritty too.

I can't wait to see what comes next. I love your stories. Please tell me ally and zac get backs together

keep on writing, i can't wait for the next chapter

Yep..... knew he'd end up feeling like an ass......

I love this story it just keeps getting better and better can't wait for the next part

He really screwed this up! How will he ever get his mate back now, much less be able to protect her?

This story is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapters! :)

This Story is amazing and so captivating....I can't wait For more

You must update soon!!! PLEASE!!!

PLEASE update soooooonnn!!!!!

goes to show you how gullible we mere mortals can be. He needs to man up and go save them, apologize to The Branaan Pack, beggg for forgiveness. Add more soon.

Please, Please, Please! Next chapter

Oh please hurry with the next chapter!!

... next chapter... story continue... Rick and Kate ...

usually they end up together already but you ARE GIVING IT A REAL FEEL OF LIFE cause sometimes in real life they dont always get the girl this so great dont mess it up the feeling.

Please finish this or keep writing. This is a horrible place to be kept waiting at in terms of the whole story. So hard to see them manipulated so easily. Can't wait to read more. Great work. Love your writing.

Hey, loving the story. Please don't make us wait long periods for each chapter.

What happened have you forgot about your story.

You left this at the worst possible spot. You need to write cause I am dying here!!! We need to know what happens

What???? Oh you better finish writing this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Screaming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please write more!!!!

Would you maybe consider writing longer chapters?

Btw, awesome story!

WRITE MORE NOW WRITE MORE NOW WRITE MORE NOW WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Said screaming violently)

Hi, please bring out the next chapter. It's getting so exciting, can't wait for more

I am doing one more once over on the next chapter and I will submit it within the hour! It is 10 microsoft word pages, but by Literotica standards it will be short, just so you know! Technical difficulties as well- I have no spell checker, so grammar and spelling nazis prepare to cry :P

Should be up within the next few days- don't forget to comment!!!

Its just the waiting for months between the chapters is a bit irritating. But great work with the stories.

love love love love it but....More?please more.....

Really love where the story is going.

now I must admit that I liked your style in the beginning and despite peoples comments you still followed your own beat and the story was coming along very nicely. You are a pretty good writer, not the best, but good.................. after I read this chapter I just got disgusted. it is so CLICHE. Zac makes a mistake, Ally becomes defensive, she breaks the bond then regrets it. now she is gonna resent him but still be in pain and he will feel like he does not deserve her and blah blah blah. First of all he is a were and the ALPHA! he should have picked up on the strange scent on Keith IMMEDIATELY POTION OR NOT! secondly, Keith should have been able to communicate with his Alpha and best friend as well. obviously you have underestimated the mating bond because even if they are not fully mated Ally should have sensed that something was wrong with her mate. THIRD even if Zac did not realize that it wasn't keith at least Ally should have, how he acted was entirely unlike him...... and then she turns around and trusts him then breaks the bond? the whole thing feels fake! the weres are underrated, the vamp is overrated, the characters are inconsistent and so is the plot. Ally seemed smarter, at one point u said that Zac had deep blue orbs when his eyes are supposed to be emerald green. I think you had ideas running all over the place and things got messy. I hope this story at least shapes up to be decent. in the future, think through your plot more carefully if you want a hit

i stil like it though, these kinds of plots just really upset me. keep on writing tho :)