by patricia51
The sudden rough coupling in the bookstore was not believable, and the sudden appearance of the husband's boss and wife at the shore was also too calculated.
I enjoyed all 4 chapters and thought they were done well for a shifting POV story. My favorite was the first, but they are all very enjoyable. I didn't exactly buy the ending of Ch4 because so much had been skipped in the telling, but it wasn't anything that interfered with my enjoyment of the whole.