All Comments on 'Raising Alex Ch. 03'

Very nice.

Jamie and Mitch are getting know each other. I know there is a quiet before the storm.

Keep going and it is a good story. You've found a fickle bunch of folks so if possible update often or they'll forget about you and this good story. I did and only noticed the title again today missing Ch. 2 posting.. Editing is another thing folks will "ding" you about so find one or proofread after you rest. I normally don't follow stories by new posting authors until its finished because sometime they don't get finshed at all and that sucks. So here's to hoping that this very good on the way to great story continues in a timely manner. Peace

I am really liking this story. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Sweet and sexy. Looking forward to more. Keep it coming. You definitely have a following.

nice smooth easy to read story , please keep it coming its a joy to read

your strory is good, solid characters, nice background and lots of potential. can't wait for the next installment.

why is this taking so long to write? seriously...this is good stuff. make the chapters longer pls. : ) good job so far. :)

Keep up the good work!

Nice story. I like Mitch and Jamie together. They both have much hurt in their pasts. They should slowly build a friendship then a relationship. It will be more exciiting and fulfilling then.

Now that you are back; monthly or more frequent updates would be great, as time allows. ~Bluegardenia

I'm loving the storyline of this. I do think it could benefit from a little proofreading and slight editing, though. Some of your words are antonyms that are misspelled for their purpose here, and some of the sentence structures inhibit the flow of the reader, but the story itself is wonderful. Good luck, and HURRY UP with the next installment, wouldja?! LOL

Hope your graduation went well along with the end of the school year. Really like this story a lot. I hope you are going to continue.

Thanks for writing.

Megan

I hope you update soon...This is an amazing story :) Write soon!

I just discovered ur story today and I really enjoyed all three chapters and I can't wait for the next installment.

I just readed all three parts and i enjoyed them. I look forward to the next one.

I love the nice slow simmer that this story has, I look forward to reading more on them.