All Comments on 'Raven Revisited'

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e33boome33boomover 14 years ago
Please continue

Really great story, hope you continue because I would love to see where Raven is leading him (perhaps training him for Rochelle? for herself?)

ChristopherDBChristopherDBover 14 years agoAuthor
More Raven stories to come

Thanks for the compliment. I wrote a total of four Raven stories, two of which have already been posted, and I have some ideas outlined for a few more. It's just a matter of getting the time to write them. I'll post the next story in a week or so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
small comment slave always small letters!

enjoyed the story, almost perfect.

as an owned slave, know that slave is an object, not "I", me, but it.

also slave always small letters including name of slave.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Why not dominate her

Is Jake such a wimp that he did not just tie her up when he came over?

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