by christy20
Nicely, written story. I liked the public sex and humiluation. I am studying Spanish and I hope one day I'll be able to write it as well as you do English. Second languages are tough. I would suggest, kindly, that you use an editor. I believe you'll improve your English grammar and sentence structure very quickly if you do.
i love the tottal dominance plus my girls names rebecca to yaa its awesome loved you story