All Comments on 'Reluctantly Exposed'

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JonTaylorJonTayloralmost 12 years ago
Grammar

Good grammar in the title and teaser is crucial. That missing apostrphe s chases readers away.

malishalmalishalalmost 12 years ago
HOT!

This was sexy. Would love more from you!

DiannahDiannahalmost 12 years ago
Awwww!

Whenever I get to the end of the story and find myself disappointed that it's over, I know I read a good story! More please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

this story needs a 2nd chapter

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