All Comments on 'Renting and a New Lease'

you've had a bit of a break, please continue! Interested to see where you go with things as you've left a few possibilities open. So far the only thing i would suggest is more length, short stories are just too short.

Please don't stop and write another chapter.

this was a nice

Will she share or not?? I am wondering if she has another married friend who might be needing some extra male attention that their husband is not giving??

I really liked this and want to read more from you. You have sparked my interest greatly in this story.

Great first effort! Definitely write follow-up stories to this one!

Maybe slow things down. Add her girlfriend @ wild times, or buddies from college. Nice story.

You sure kept me up

Excellent first effort.

Five.

holy cow that was an excellent story

you conveyed her speech and thoughts well. I enjoyed the story very much. A very good first effort.

I agree with kalodin. You really did well with Seong-Hee's character - to the point, up front, and let's get to it. Do continue!

i think a loooooong term deal with them should be explored maybe finding out that it was her husband that couldnt have kids?

There was a great build up. Great read

I can't wait for chapter 2.

great debut

Just a fine debut here. Very real and very well written. You must know some Korean women; you just seemed to climb inside the mind of this one. Hope we see more of your work. Kal

I liked it. Short but sweet.