All Comments on 'Rescue Ch. 02'

Hello, Literotica Reader!

This series, by far, has been the most popular of the stories I've read (with over 25,000 hits on each!). It seems I've touched a nerve with those of us that are absolutely in lust with the Asian female form.

Chou is based on a very lovely woman I know from Lit and other chatrooms. She knows who she is and she appreciates the idea!

Please leave your comments and let me know how you liked my story! A writer improves with practice and feedback, so your thoughts are very much invited.

Pyro

Why are both of your series unfinished?

First of all, because on the Trantor series, I lost most of the middle part when my car was stolen awhile back - along with the laptop that everything was on (the story is 20 years old and I was transcribing it from my typewritten copy when it was lost) and secondly because I'm a perfectionist when it comes to writing... if the story isn't working, I'll set it aside until I can figure out how to make it work so that you, the reader, can enjoy it without spelling and grammatical errors and will write other things, including fiction and non-fiction... that and I work.

I would like to see more on this series.

Truely a fantasically great story. Once I started, I couldn't stop til I finished it. I would really like to more more of this.