All Comments on 'Retribution Within the City Ch. 2'

me that was hot.

Your writing shows an extreme amount of talent and imagination. It is also rewarding to read one of the few stories that is not so filled with errors in spelling and punctuation that the plot is hard to follow. I was beginning to fear that there was not a person in the US who could convey an idea in black and white. Thanks.

The ending ruined it a dream, really!! and it would have been better if she lived and continued living a life of abuse and forced sex..