by amber_now26
"that special place that just sex alone can't take you".
Both this and writingdragon's ending were well done, but very different. You both reached about the same ending by following very different paths.
Well done!
And very nicely written, butt!!!! She’s cheating on her husband, whether she loves him or not. The story seems to have a cloud of doom over it, especially considering who her husband is. Hope you are planning to write another chapter, because this doesn’t seem complete yet, unless we are to assume the worst.
but I have to agree it doesn't feel complete. Like we are supposed to wait for another chapter or for us to think about the outcome.
For the little I gathered here, her husband wasn't a bad guy, yet, he wasn't J.T....
Oh well, it sucks to be him. :(
I didn't read through the comments, but my eye caught on the one saying this isn't complete, and I agree.
Please write the sequel to the sequel!
Thanks for two good pieces!
John
I read 'Reunion' and was left hanging. Why did Angelica run away when she and JT had such good sex together? Reunion: The Sequel brought it all together. I'm glad I took the time to read it, as it became a tender, loving story. Thanks for sharing.
Also wonderful done and crisp - you are a good writer with a clear mind - nice -
I still want to know if Little Paulie has them killed, dies off, or truly loves her enough to let her go, or, or, or???
LOL I guess I have to let others tell me -
Short and sweet -
Of course a bit too short - Little Paulie has friends - whether he is in the mob or not - and he is not going to be happy - pains a comin'
But true love might be worth it heh -
The mechanics are every bit as good, where the story went. But with Angelica cheating...if this were in “Living Wives” category, there’d a been a beating coming up.
4-stars
I suspected she was married I hoped she wasn't. But this is a part 2 that needs a part 3 it's incomplete. Not sure how I feel about the characters but despite the excellent writing I'm feeling dissatisfied with how it's been left. BardnotBard