by abashed-dreamer
None of it appeals to me except the possible sexual interaction of brother and sister and it does not look as though that might happen. I might let a woman's urine run over my fingers, that's about as far as I will go, that way. No drinking urine or getting peed on except for what i just mentioned. If folks like that I have no criticism, just not for me.
Bf
"I'd hoped the passion in our lovemaking, an hour before, would completely smooth things over, but there was a trace of unease in her voice."
That's where I stopped. The first part wasn't bad - though largely unbelieveable -- but there was no "lovemaking" in it at all. Find an editor.