All Comments on 'Revenge is Sweet Ch. 02'

Your writing was excellent, However I only gave it three star because of the Rape of a young girl as pay back for her mothers sins, true she was stealing, but she was set up.

Em of all people should be against rape being raped herself.

After being draped herself she should have never condoned it being done to another young girl.

In my view, you've hit your stride. I thought the first chapter was a bit weak, but this one gets back to the point of it all.

They turned that little freak out! She'll want it every single day now, and I don't know what she'll do when they decide to leave her leave and her glistening orifices for another town!!

You should definitely continue it to conclusion. But put it in a more popular category (such as Nonconsent) so that it will get more exposure