All Comments on 'Rough around the Edges Ch. 03'
by Myanlass
- 25 Comments
mekakyalmost 15 years agoLove it, can't wait to read more! So glad that Jade broken up with her ass of a boyfriend. James is about to do the damn thing!
PennLadyalmost 15 years agoI have to admit to getting a little impatient with Jade and James, but the end was totally worth it. It was great to see her end things with Dante, although I'm sure more is coming on that front. The candy -- or lack thereof -- was an excellent tough. On grammatical matters, there was one problem. In the long exchange between Katrina and Jade, it got a little confusing b/c of just the statements and no indication of who was talking. Not too bad, just a little confusing. The dialog is good, although a little stilted. It might help if your characters used more contractions when they talk to each other, like You're instead of You are, etc. Looking forward to more, though.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoIt's great that Jade finally ended things with Dante although am not sure I'm so cool with the phone thing but defo happy about the turnout of things. Please don't leave us hanging for too long!
C_frommnalmost 15 years agoIt's good to see Jade moving on as Dante has Already moved on a long time ago.
It will be interesting to see how Deborah handles the News and what kind of Trouble she brings with her for Jame's and Scott.
Curt
IndianChocolatealmost 15 years agoThat was soooooo Freakin great! I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter!
I can't believe that bitch found out where James was. I hope she learns her lesson!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoJames was hilarious, kicking everyone out like that so he can go meet up with Jade. Now the only thing I would like for Jade to do is to officially dismiss Dante. I mean what is she waiting for, the joker is no good. As for psycho ex wife, wth does she want? Maybe a restraining order should be put out on her.
Anonymousalmost 15 years ago*laughs* That was FANTASTIC! I truly love this series & I look forward to reading what comes next. With the amount of clean heat these two go thru I can only imagine the real heat they'll drum up!
pmpktyalmost 15 years agoIt was so good and then you stopped right there. You got me, because now I'm hooked and can't wait for the rest of the story.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoIt is ridoiculous and yes I meant to spell it that way woman, great great writing. I am hooked on your phonics, connect those words.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI am rofling over this story... just started reading and i'm loving it!
THELOVELY1GLOalmost 13 years agoJade is learning her value and worth, you go girl!!!
When will Deborah know that it's OVER!!!
EuphoriaSlam69almost 12 years agoShe asked for it! Now bring it on James! LOL
trubblemakuralmost 11 years agothat's what I'm talkin' about! Love your stories nice hotness and romance mixed up deliciously!
AMHJ89over 10 years agoLol so much for being noble indeed...Love the gift idea, definitely got his attention
Anonymousover 9 years agoLOL ... I CN LEARN A LOT FRM DIS STORY ESPECIALLY HW 2 GET MY MAN 2 CME HME
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