All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 06'

the plot thickens. Sheriff dumb dumb is a joke and so is Carolyn. I wish Malcolm would stop being so trusting of someones word. Especially when your considering a butt kisser like the mayor and sheriff dumb dumb who has a stupid point to prove.

and liking the story quite a bit. Wonder what's so important that Sabella might freak when she hears it. Hanging, maybe? Hmmm. Looking forward to the next one! <3 L.

I'm totally gagging for the next chapter! Great story, i'm completely hoooked

The suspense is killing me! Hurry up and update, PLEASE

I love this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm intriqued what they are going to reveal to Sabella. I imagine it's pretty bad, giving the time period... the 1950's. Lord, Caroline and the sheriff sure are nosey and determined. -Bluegardenia

I love it! I love it ! I love it!! Malcolm is a legacy. What do you mean a legacy. Is Malcolm a warlock? Is this story paranormal sci-fi? I cannot wait to read the next chapter..bring it on! I am so exciting!!! You are fantastic writer.

I love it! I love it ! I love it!! Malcolm is a legacy. What do you mean a legacy. Is Malcolm a warlock? Is this story paranormal sci-fi? I cannot wait to read the next chapter..bring it on! I am so exciting!!! You are fantastic writer.

Another well written and fantastic chapter! Your story reads like a novel, and enjoyable one at that. Malcolm, Sabella, Mark, and Regina interaction and characters are strong and not hypocrites. It's great how you've developed main characters and don't rely on supporting characters to prop main characters up as larger than life. I also like how proactive each one are without making them annoyingly super sweet and passive or super dumb. Smart characters, except Sheriff Jackass and Carolyn. Good job making those two unlikable without relying on lazy formula for antagonists.