by Mandyxxx42
... and your racy punctuation style.
Am also looking forward to reading about at least two people getting filled up to the gunnels - if not overflowing, lots of lapping and waves breaking, maybe even things being at half mast (but hopefully not for long) and as for all those ropes - well the nautical mind boggles!
Keep it up (so to speak).
R.
I confess, I expected much better english from you since you are from England. But I have scrolled to the bottom of the story since you were driving me mad sorting through your lack of punctuation and your run-on sentences. I believe I would prefer reading your husband's 3000 word treatise on how to set a jib. I must say, however, that your bio picture ia rather nice.
I'm having a hard time visualizing what the characters look like, but the groundwork has been laid for a fine vacation!
Make it quick, lady, this is going to be a good ride. Sorry, 'sail'...anyway, I'm sure we will all enjoy the rocking boat...
This is only the first chapter of a story.
The story will unfurl in future chapters rendering the title and apology appropriate.
Sorry if this wasn't clear to you.
The only reference to sailing was a boat, well, OK, 2 boats.
Besides all the periods that are missing (way beyond 'run on sentences'), the point of the story seems to be missing also.