All Comments on 'Santa's Little Helpers'

by MarkRF

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Jolly Elves?

Very nice and would have been sweet if you had given us come reason to want her to have a nice Christmas.

CrabgirlCrabgirlover 15 years ago
I love this

Great story, well written. And apologies for disagreeing with the last comment but it her reasons for needing a nice Christmas were obvious. Says in the first line that she was lonely. Well done, look forwards to reading more.

ejlsejlsover 15 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story telling. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

BigfootloverBigfootloverover 15 years ago
Great Job

Hey man, this is Bigfootlover. lol I loved your story. It is like mine only with elves. You should check out my story with Bigfoot titled The taste of Sasquatch.

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