All Comments on 'Sara and Charley's Journey Ch. 05'

Steve, you need to change the promo line, so a reader can tell what each chapter is about.

I found Ch. 05 in the 'New' list but went to your site to start with Ch. 01 and I'm glad I did. Your stories are well written and completly believable. Great job! I noticed a few awkward spots in the dialog and one typo but they were insignificant in the overall impression.

Thanks