All Comments on 'Sascha's Descent'

A pretty good story, but you really need to clean up the typo's or it's laughable

"He came on *his* face and tits?" "she came up gasping for *hair*"?

Uh huh.

Annoying I didn’t read the Tags so that’s on me, your story contains several things that are a hard No for me because they’re: excessive 30 blows with a paddle for a first time interaction and without any warm up, or they’re dangerous and unhealthy ; like A2M and anal without lube - blood is not an acceptable lube “Without warning, he shoved into her dry asshole, ripping her apart as he did so.” So that and the A2M are both unsafe practices. So much for “I will take care of you”.

Some minor errors in grammar but aside from my personal limits it’s a well written story.

Tess (uk)