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We fell on the bed began removing our clothes. Once naked we slid between the sheets. I laid on my back and willed Lauren between my legs.
I gave myself to her willingly.
As Lauren tenderly skewered me on her beautiful girl cock I knew that I would never be with anyone else. I surrendered myself to her at that moment, and she could see it in my eyes. She made slow passionate love to me that morning, and without the aid of formulas we came together.
While Lauren playfully pushed her softening cock into my cum filled ass, I took the ring she had given me off of my right ring finger and placed it on my left.
Lauren wept with joy.
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Lauren and I now live as husband and wife. Well, because we are.
Lauren's extremely costly formula is protected by multiple patents even though few chemists in the world are capable of duplicating what Lauren has created.
Jouir du Puissance has been a smashing commercial success for Lauren and, by extension, for me as well. We are both employed by her privately held corporation and work from our country home.
Of course, with the two of us working from home, we spend a lot of time in our pajamas, in bed, making out like a couple of horny kids.
- COMMENTS
LOFTYsmallisbeteralmost 2 years agoThank you for this story, It was the best iv read. Had me on the edge of my seat all the way throw it.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAs a trans woman, I expected something better than the typical coercion and lies to top men that runs rampant here. The writing style was good but the situation was abhorrent and left a bitter taste in my mouth.
taustalmost 4 years agoThis was a great piece of erotica. Sure, it's not going to be totally realistic and some of the anonymous comments reflect this. They give reasonable feedback and I'm not going to criticize or argue with their points. What is important to me is that I enjoyed your story and wanted to thank you for writing it.
Anonymousover 4 years agoLauren manipulates Seth via the perfume, doesn't respect Seth enough to be honest about who she is, and when Seth finally confronts her, HE ends up apologizing?
This is so unrealistic, you have completely demolished any suspension of disbelief your readers might have granted you. If your characters don't have realistic and accurate emotional reactions and interactions to the situations you create as a writer, you might as well make them aliens.
As a writer, you can create fantastical worlds, characters and situations; completely unreal, never happen stuff and readers will accept it, IF, and this is a non-negotiable IF the characters act and react like people really act and react. It's what separates an imaginative storyteller from an author.
To be an author, you have to study humans and learn what some call 'the human condition'. If you don't learn how real people 'tick', you'll never have believable stories. It's what make becoming a good author so effing difficult. It's hard to do, and why so many writers and storytellers never become authors, let alone good authors.
You must become a student of the human mind and psyche, to be able to create believable characters and human interactions. You can't just make characters act in a manner to carry your plot line, your plot line has to be written to work with your characters. And that, too, is why it is so hard to be an author.
Hope this helps you understand where this story falls short of your goals of it being believable.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI think this story should have been tagged as "gay sex" rather than "older woman".
Coerced or forced is more like it. Disturbing connotations.
saintmichael95almost 5 years agoIt would be really nice if you added a mind control warning at the beginning of this, because that's clearly what it is. This is an older transexual woman using a pheromone mind control purfume to alter a man's mind and make him attracted to her. Period. Honestly, this would have been a far better story without the mind control aspects...
