All Comments on 'Second Chance'

what is their limits to the moon, TK U MLJ LV NV

You rushed it, glossed over his relationship with Tiffany and the arrangement with Sandy felt that needed more. Janes attitude change was fast and a little over the top, not as bad as your other attempts.The ending also seemed rushed, BUT IMHO this is one of your better stories.

You have talent, no argument there.

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Good short story.