by theoncomingstorm
Sweetie is NOT an LW. She has NO apparent contact with her estranged Hubby, does not reflect ANY real 'guilt' (or any other feelings about a bad, mistaken match-up!)
This is, at best, a series of unrelated incidents which belong in Erotic Couplings!'. Even then, there is NO drama in any of these hook-ups! This is mainly "gee, look ... tab D fits into slot P!". (change slot designator at will! A, M, T, H)
Another story without a husband being mentioned. You don't even have to be married in this category anymore. Just be a sicko wacc and you can post all you want!
It might help the writing if you combined these short "chapters" into one longer submission. It's all too episodic and disconnected right now.
... out if it can get worse. So far I am not disappointed. It keeps getting dumber.
Wrong section Mr Writer. You crafted the perfect picture of a women who is solely a life suppport system for her cunt with no other redeeming qualities whatsoever
The husband is never mentioned. EC would be better.