by Otto26
I did like this story, very much. I liked the fact that she stalked him without him knowing it, watching him and learning what he liked. Then had the courage to go to him in a way that she was sure he would like. Very good story.
Your story was very nice.Well written and thought out.It would be nice if you carried it a little farther about how they build the relationship, and what about the "other" woman , the town and her parents? There's plently more material here to write!
I liked that he got to know her, and let her learn about herself ... such a sexy start! Can't wait to read more!