All Comments on 'Selena Doesn't Have Sex Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well worth the wait

More amazing work from MTL. The ass licking and whatnot isn't even my thing but he makes it sooo worth reading. The only, and I mean ONLY detriment to this story is how damn repetitive the dirty talk is. I found myself skipping over it after the 3rd page because it's the same thing 5 times with just a word or two switched. Barring that, MTL continues to be one

Of Literotica's best.

parputter69parputter69almost 12 years ago
You aren't teasing us??

I hope you are not teasing us. Hopefully there is much more to come. You can not bring up Vanessa and Ashley plus other Disney gals without continuing on.

Only negative is repetitive nature of "begging". About 1/2 as much would be better. Don't eliminate just cut down a little bit.

misgoody22misgoody22almost 12 years ago
Beginning got to stop

Beginning has got to stop! I skipped have the story because of the dirty talk! Oh I think they should do lapdances and scisorring! That would be so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
We Want More!

We desperately want to see more of this. There's so much else these girls (and perhaps others) could do without Selena having sex. I keep visiting this page hoping that there will be a new one of these to read. I like all the other stories you write, but this series is by far my favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
SO HOT

What a hot story but was really hoping that Ashley and Vanessa would have gotten involved after they were mentioned. Please MTL17, write chapter 4!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beth and Selena

Write about how Beth fucked Selena up the ass

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...