by MTL17
What a hot story but was really hoping that Ashley and Vanessa would have gotten involved after they were mentioned. Please MTL17, write chapter 4!
We desperately want to see more of this. There's so much else these girls (and perhaps others) could do without Selena having sex. I keep visiting this page hoping that there will be a new one of these to read. I like all the other stories you write, but this series is by far my favorite.
Beginning has got to stop! I skipped have the story because of the dirty talk! Oh I think they should do lapdances and scisorring! That would be so hot!
I hope you are not teasing us. Hopefully there is much more to come. You can not bring up Vanessa and Ashley plus other Disney gals without continuing on.
Only negative is repetitive nature of "begging". About 1/2 as much would be better. Don't eliminate just cut down a little bit.
More amazing work from MTL. The ass licking and whatnot isn't even my thing but he makes it sooo worth reading. The only, and I mean ONLY detriment to this story is how damn repetitive the dirty talk is. I found myself skipping over it after the 3rd page because it's the same thing 5 times with just a word or two switched. Barring that, MTL continues to be one
Of Literotica's best.